+Unhappy with the current ending to Episode 25 now that the story is less about Dana and more about Tilahun/Dana/Kelile. Appears too much to be surrendering, or at least taking, RINC authority. Change to a more independent stance. PAge 1 rewrite of episode, editing doesn't seem to fix the issue.
+Sometime in the First Episode ++Dana meets with an undercover RINC operative who delivers intelligence on the Zakiri battle coming up, and how it's not expected to go well. She sends him back into the Zakiri militia, expecting either him to kill her to keep his cover, or her to rescue him, to save a valuable asset. In the end, we don't see him again during the episode.
Just a head's up that I'll be randomly posting bits and pieces and chapters of a story I'm working on called The Long Road home - a prequel to A Wish for Wings. Eventually I'll gather up the scraps and put them into a more cohesive, and better edited, book for publishing, but the folks here'll get a preview of what's to come.
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